Sold Out In Bloomington

[Gerrit]

I've finished the "Sold Out In Bloomington" cover. It's for an audience recording. Unfortunatley the sound quality is rather bad, but the show is great and I had some good pictures from the show, so I decided to make a cover for it. I hope you like it. Please let me know what you think about it.

And here you can download the full size version:
Sold Out In Bloomington (zip file)

Greetings,
Gerrit

[Deke Rivers]

Seems a shame to have such a fine cover for such a poor sounding cd (though I have never heard it myself). Good work on this cover. You have improved this release with your cover.

[NightRider]

All looks great to me Gerrit.....nice to see you back designing

[U.S. Male]

An outstanding cover design Gerrit. I have never seen that many photos of this suit, so this is one thing that I'm happy to see. I also agree with Unchained, the inlay is fantastic....all the way around a fine job...keep them coming

[Steve]

came out great!!

nice one I like the inlay very much!!!

Good work.

[Gerrit]

Thanks!
I'm also glad that I'm designing again. I missed it. I hope the next cover will follow soon.

[Manhattoe]

Well, I like it and the covers are certainly by far better than the sound.

But watch your typography, Gerrit.

Just have a closer look between the L and the V all occurrences of the word ELVIS. These two letters have to be ajusted to each other manually to avoid a void (nice pun, isn't it?).

And I think we also talked about this issue in the Berlin board: I like the way you combine graphic elements with pictures, but here it conveys a sense of technical deadness.

This metallic gradient is too lifeless and it casts a leaden hue over the complete design, which is a pity.

I think, you can improve this design. The great pix would be well worth it (and a little more sharpness would do them good).

But anyway: keep on going, you are really gifted.

[Gerrit]

Wow! Many thanks for this professional review.
I'll try to improve those things on the next cover.