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    The Vigil........A Poem For Elvis.

    It's gonna be another long and sleepless night
    The August moon reflecting hues of pale-blue light
    A million stars are flick'ring here above my head
    Like candles queued to light the wick of one that's dead

    While by the gates the crowds are gathered as before
    A rev'rent silence still pervades the second floor
    And love and mem'ries echo 'cross the rooms downstairs
    When lights are dimmed and all the world is unaware

    I see you standing silent in the music room
    To watch the solemn vigil by the Garden tomb
    The famous grin slips slowly 'cross that lovely face
    To feel that love still grip you in its warm embrace

    And if they tried they might have heard your laugh escape
    Or seen your form slip slowly past the window drapes
    And shake your head for what you know but they can't see
    That death was just a way for God to set you free

    One day they'll know that you were just a breath away
    Behind a veil their eyes as yet can't penetrate
    Where once again old friends are gath'ring for the night
    Just beyond our mortal ears and mortal sight

    Pauline and Dodger bustle 'round the kitchen door
    And Charlie's laughter echoes as in days of yore
    Vernon's holding Gladys as they sway and dance
    A brand new chapter of a very old romance

    JD Sumner's warming up that velvet bass
    While Vester talks with Jesse 'bout those Music Gates
    And every year the Jungle Room gets fuller still
    As more and more are gathered by the Father's will

    And satisfied that all he gave was not forgot
    Knowing all his struggles here were not for naught
    Elvis sits among those loved ones God restored
    Just beyond the reach of those outside the door

    Who wander past the mansion under velvet skies
    Stars and candles both reflecting in their eyes
    Unaware that just beyond that solemn throng
    A treasured friend still laughs and sings familiar songs.

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    I do not know who wrote this magnificent poem... but it is the most imaginative thing that I have read in quite a while! This is beautiful...BEAUTIFUL!! As I read, I could actually imagine the whole scenario... It is just as I, myself, imagine it for Elvis. Surrounded by loved ones...happy and free. Our loss is Heaven's gain....

    Daddy, I miss you more every day. You will always be my hero..

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    Thanks dear, but magnificent it's not. Just my thoughts on this sad day.

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    Sweetheart...I say it again...your thoughts are truly magnificent... I love it!

    Daddy, I miss you more every day. You will always be my hero..

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    Wonderful job, Mad_Scatter,

    EDIT: Wow! I just read your poem a second time. That is the best tribute poem to ELVIS I have EVER read!!!
    Last edited by SweetCaroline; 08-15-2007 at 11:48 PM.

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    wow.. very beautiful poem. it really brought tears to my eyes..
    [CENTER]"The only time I can be me is when I walk through the door and lock it from the inside" -Elvis

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    AMAZING song.............this is truly the most beautiful song to Elvis I have ever read.


    I think Elvis would be really honored that you wrote such a brilliant song for him. He admired those who could write songs.


    Thank you so much for sharing it with us


    Holly

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    Very nice
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    Til we meet you again, may God bless you, Adios.

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    Very Beautiful Scatter.. thanks for sharing it with us. Dovey
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    Thanks Scatter, its the best verse I have read to Elvis. Brilliant. take care. c ya later. Paul.
    If all the modern music was the oceans - then Elvis would be the boat on which we sail.

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    thanks for posting its a great poem very touching

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    I agree with everyone Scatter, that is the most beautiful heartfelt poem for Elvis I've ever read.

    Diane

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    Scatter did write this poem and did a great job at it too.

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    OMG!! Very beautiful poem!! Really touching...


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