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spanish eyes
12-31-2008, 07:16 AM
I heard this poem a long time ago "if tears could build a stairway, and memories build a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven, and bring you home again". This got me thinking, what if I could do that and reach Elvis, I wonder what message he would have for his fans. So I wrote the following poem based on my own thoughts:-

I wanna thank ya for all your devotion,
your love for me is beyond compare,
the words ya speak about me,
touches me more deeply than I can say,
they fill my heart with so much joy and put a smile upon my face,
so once again I thank y'all for loving me this way.

presley31
12-31-2008, 07:43 AM
That was very lovely to read maria. I would write a poem but it wouldn't be that good.

U.S. Male
12-31-2008, 07:47 AM
That's very nice of you Maria (y)

spanish eyes
12-31-2008, 08:05 AM
That was very lovely to read maria. I would write a poem but it wouldn't be that good.

awww thanks Jen. Whatever you write Jen would be lovely cos it would come from your heart :hug:

spanish eyes
12-31-2008, 08:06 AM
Thanks to you too Steve

Vegas King
12-31-2008, 08:07 AM
Very nice Maria.I sure enjoyed

spanish eyes
12-31-2008, 08:22 AM
Very nice Maria.I sure enjoyed

Thanks Vegas King that's very nice of you to say so

Elvis_Lady_1984
12-31-2008, 09:44 AM
This is very lovely Maria. I really enjoyed it. As I was reading I pictured Elvis saying and smiling. Just fantastic!

spanish eyes
12-31-2008, 09:49 AM
This is very lovely Maria. I really enjoyed it. As I was reading I pictured Elvis saying and smiling. Just fantastic!

Thank you for your kind words Elvis Lady :D

desiree
12-31-2008, 03:04 PM
I heard this poem a long time ago "if tears could build a stairway, and memories build a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven, and bring you home again". This got me thinking, what if I could do that and reach Elvis, I wonder what message he would have for his fans. So I wrote the following poem based on my own thoughts:-

I wanna thank ya for all your devotion,
your love for me is beyond compare,
the words ya speak about me,
touches me more deeply than I can say,
they fill my heart with so much joy and put a smile upon my face,
so once again I thank y'all for loving me this way.

Aww, that's a lovely and thread GF! I can almost hear his voice through the words. And what warms my heart the most is knowing he's really mean every word. A :hug: for Elvis :wub:

spanish eyes
01-01-2009, 01:33 PM
Aww, that's a lovely and thread GF! I can almost hear his voice through the words. And what warms my heart the most is knowing he's really mean every word. A :hug: for Elvis :wub:

Thanks GF :D :hug: to you

cbg84
01-01-2009, 01:35 PM
Cute I like it.

spanish eyes
01-02-2009, 08:34 AM
Cute I like it.

Thanks cbg84

cprimm
01-02-2009, 09:31 AM
A great tribute to our man. Thanks for posting.

spanish eyes
01-02-2009, 10:27 AM
A great tribute to our man. Thanks for posting.

You're welcome cprimm

Burning_Love
01-04-2009, 02:59 PM
This is beautiful. My nan has it on her grave, one of her favourite poems.

WHITETIGERMAN
01-04-2009, 03:41 PM
I like it too...............it's sweet and lovely.Very touching.