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NightRider
04-17-2004, 09:15 AM
I did this design a few months ago...but was never happy with the results.

So I decided to have another go at it - here's how it looks so far :D

http://hometown.aol.co.uk/NightRiderathome/ONC.jpg

What do you think guys

Little Sister
04-17-2004, 09:28 AM
I'm no guy - but what the heck! :-D

I really dig the back and the inside... you've chosen some fantastic photos!! Now the front, in my opinion that needs some work.

Some suggestions:
Use just one photo, the way it is now it looks a bit muddle. I see that you used the same shape one both front and back - good thinking! But what if you use it to put the title on, instead of the photo that imo doesn't add anything to the cover. (if you try this - you can also loose the outlining on "one night in vegas" - which right now just make it difficult to read).

Thumbs up!!

NightRider
04-17-2004, 09:36 AM
Originally posted by Little Sister@Apr 17 2004, 04:28 PM
I'm no guy - but what the heck! :-D

I really dig the back and the inside... you've chosen some fantastic photos!! Now the front, in my opinion that needs some work.

Some suggestions:
Use just one photo, the way it is now it looks a bit muddle. I see that you used the same shape one both front and back - good thinking! But what if you use it to put the title on, instead of the photo that imo doesn't add anything to the cover. (if you try this - you can also loose the outlining on "one night in vegas" - which right now just make it difficult to read).

Thumbs up!!
'Guys' is a term not aimed at any particular gender...well it wasn't on that occasion, sorry LS :oops:

Thanks for you comments about the cover.

I quite like the front and am not sure about whether to change it or not.

I get your point about the lettering being hard to read. But that does only apply on this small version. It is very clear on the big version.

Still, comments logged...i'll have a look at it without the other picture. (y)

NightRider
04-17-2004, 09:40 AM
Originally posted by unchained@Apr 17 2004, 04:28 PM
I think the back is a real winner, but i do not like the font to much.
It?s difficult to use colours like black and blue together, cause these colours almost can?t be mixed. An the other hand blue and white are two colours that can go together. So I?m having mixed feelings about this alt.cover
You don't like the front either Unchained :doh:

I thought it was great (y)

Only kidding.

I do like the colours though. Maybe i'll play round with the pictures a little.

I kinda dig the back too... (y)

spinout-designs
04-17-2004, 09:41 AM
I agree with what's been said so far really. The back cover is a real winner, one of your best so far. The insert photo is fantastic but the front cover seems a bit cluttered.